In the beginning...
Outline - Hermione has at last returned to finish her 7th and final year at Hogwarts after the War between Voldermort, with her two friends Ron and Harry. Hermione is announced head girl and draco is her partner for the year as head boy. As they work together they acknowledge each others differences and at last admit their unspoken love for each other.
Characters - Hermione, Draco, Ron and Harry
Hermione - shocked and angered by draco being headboy, as the story deepens, she realizes that draco is the one she truely loves and struggles to come to terms with her feelings for him after their hateful relationship they both shared with each other while attending Hogwarts.
Draco - Draco has always had hidden, secret feelings for Hermione throughout their time at Hogwarts. He concealed his feelings as his father and family would have looked down upon their relationship and his feelings for her as she is a muggle born, "mudblood"
Ron - At first Ron is not worried about the amount of time Hermione has to spend with Draco to assist in the Head of the School duties, but as the story deepens he realizes and suspects that Hermione as fallen for someone else.
Harry - Hermione confides in harry her new found feelings for Draco and asks for advice and to not tell Ron. Faced with the dilemma of keeping this importantly huge secret from his bestfriend Ron, and also finding out the shocking news the Hermione has feelings for his former school vival, Harry finds it hard to know which way to turn.
Writing point of view : Hermione Granger
INTRO - Starts off with point of view of Hermione Granger. Initially shocked and disgusted with the news that Draco Malfoy has been awarded Head Boy and will be spending most of his spear time with her due to Head's of the school duties.
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I bolted off the Hogwarts Express as soon as it came into a halt outside the school that I would now be leader of with my fellow arch rival Draco Malfoy. I could hear Ron and Harry yell after me as i stormed my way through the crowd towards the warmth of my welcoming dormitory.
Great start! Looking forward to seeing more :)
ReplyDeleteGood start Sarah, good description about each character and their roles in the story. After reading your links, I understand that Draco and Hermione had a past relationship, I am excited to see how their partnership being Head Girl and Head Boy is going to be. Exciting.
ReplyDeleteSome clear planning is evident here
ReplyDeleteI'm looking forward to reading your fan fiction. I love the twist in your story. I'm a Harry Potter fan so great to see the way you have changed it.
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