Carolyns fan fiction draft

Based on the Australian television series Home and Away

Title: Deadly Love

Plot of the story: 

The story is written through Romeo's point of view. Indigo Walker (Indi) and Romeo Smith who are deeply inlove with each other get married. They have a very romantic honeymoon and you can see that they are meant to be together. Ruby Buckton is Romeo's best friend and during the wedding Romeo notices that Ruby's been crying and is not being herself. He tries to visit Ruby when he gets back from his honeymoon but she doesn't hang around long enough for him to talk to her. Indi suggests going to talk to her after dinner one night but doesn't return. We find out that Ruby has been inlove with Romeo for a very long time and when Indi doesn't return from a visit back from Ruby's and ends up in hospital we begin to wonder what really happened that night.

Characters:

Indigo Walker
Romeo Smith
Ruby Buckton

Introduction:

The introduction is the wedding scene and goes in detail of the love that Romeo has for Indi. It's a romantic beginning and you goes into detail how Romeo see's Indi through his eyes. It mentions that Romeo see's Ruby very upset during their wedding but doesn't have time to talk to her then and decides to do so when he returns. 


Middle:

Indi and Romeo have arrived to their honeymoon destination. They have a few nights together in an island paradise and I elaborate on how much they are enjoying themselves.


Ending:

The newly married couple arrive back home after their honeymoon. Romeo tries to meet up with Ruby but finds her on the beach, he tries to talk to her but she doesn't say much and walks off. He talks to Indi about it when he gets home and she suggests she goes to talk to Ruby. When Indi doesn't return that night Romeo isn't too worried but get's a shocking call from the hospital the next morning. Indi is in intensive care and won't make it.  Romeo did receive a text from Ruby saying that she's always loved him and that she's so sorry, he can't get hold of her and starts to wonder if Ruby could have had something to do with Indi's death.