Friday, 20 July 2012

Brian's Final Fan Fiction

"What do we do now?!"

"Na'vi people are going to take over the whole land soon!!" all the marines yelling.

Human world were attacked by Na'vi race so many times because Na'vi people wanted to extend their land. So many of marines were killed by Na'vi. Humans kept trying to defeat them but they were too strong and too big. Also marines didn't have information about Na'vi people and Na'vi people were too fast as well. They dodge every missiles.

"Let me handle this!! I'm Jake Sully and I've been planning for this" suddenly one of the marine shouted.

"I've an idea to defeat Na'vi clan and I have a reason to defeat Na'vi" 

"What is it" marine leader said

"Neytiri who broke my left arm and killed my younger brother when I was child"

Jake shared his ideas to other marines and they agreed it. When he was on avatar, he's been training by himself. He knows about the Na'vi clan and Neytiri.

"Just wait until I get chance to get close to Neytiri...."

"then everything goes easy.."

Luckily Jake found a woman who is Neytiri's mother and she was hunting. Jake was watching quietly. Suddenly giant creatures came out and attacked Neytiri's mother. Then Jake shoots the arrow at creatures and saved her.

"Who is it?!" she was in panic

"Calm down...I'm Jake Sully and a human."

"Why did you save me! you monster!"

"I'm not going to hurt you..I want to become one of you.."

"Can you please take me to your homeland?..." Jake carefully said

She became calm and took Jake to her homeland. All the Na'vi people were interesting in Jake and some other people were staring at him. Neytiri came to Jake and express gratitude and ask him why is he here.

"I'm human but I betrayed them and I want to become one of Na'vi."

"I really want to learn the way your life..."

"We can't just trust him!! What if he betray us later?" some Na'vi people shouted.

"Well..the only thing I can say is..I don't have a my own human body.." Jake lied.

Now Na'vi people think Jake was telling the truth and they trust Jake a bit because he saved the clan leader. All the Na'vi agreed Jake to be one of them and Neytiri was told to teach him the language and the way to live. Jake's plan goes well as he planned. Neytiri also taught him how to fight against humans. Jake told all the marines about Na'vi people fighting skills.

"We have to use poison gas to defeat Na'vi"

"Na'vi people nose is very sensitive, so their weakness is poison gas"

"....Then we can take down them easily and save our world"

As day passed...Neytiri became to love Jake but she sensed something is going wrong. She started to doubt him and she found out that Jake lied to Na'vi but she was in love with Jake already so she couldn't tell her clan about Jake. She was keeping the secret by herself. She also knew that Jake is going to kill her soon....

"After I killed Neytiri..spread the poison gas everywhere."

"Then we can defeat them all and we will win!!" Jake said proudly.

Na'vi people were busy training and Neytiri's mother is the only one who can leads Na'vi clan but Neytiri's mother thinks Neytiri can leads the clan now so she gave all the relics to Neytiri. Jake was get angry every time when he sees Neytiri but he had to keep his expression inside.

Now Jake was hiding top of the trees and shoot the arrow when Neytiri was walking by herself then Jake came to Neytiri. She is dead. Jake was just talking to her.

"Remember me? you killed my younger brother and broke my left arm when I was child"

"I've been waiting for today..I feel pain whenever I see you... but I finally did REVENGE"

"You don't deserve becoming Na'vi leader."

"Goodbye"

When Neytiri was found, it was too late. Na'vi people were shocked and realized that Jake killed her. They were angry and rage. Suddenly, blue capsule dropped from sky. Na'vi frightened but don't know what it is and then poison gas coming out from the capsule.

"RUN!!!Hold on your breathe! It's a poison gas" one of the Na'vi said.

"It's the sky people! they started to take us down!"

"It's Jake!!! He betrayed us, he lied to us at the beginning!!!"

All the Na'vi people fall down and their homeland was getting ruined by marines. It was unexpected attack. Some other Na'vi people who are alive, they were trying to fight against them but there were too many of them. Humans took over the homeland and Jake says....

"We did it...my plan was successful.."

"I did revenge"

"Now we can live peacefully..without war..no more fighting..no more hiding.."





Word Count : 809








1 comment:

  1. Good job, i was never really an avatar fan but i like your twist/spin off with jake being a bad guy. interesting read! entertaining actually :) good job

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