Short Plot : Jake Sully is on alien body which is called an avatar and also looks exactly the same as Na'vi race. He found out his younger brother's death and it was Neytiri who killed him and broke Jake's legs and left arm in the past. He decides to revenge on her and pretending like he's one of Na'vi clan fighting against humans.
Characters : Jake Sully , Neytiri
Jake Sully : Courageous, determines, passionate. He lost his legs and left arm and his younger brother when he was a child. He begins to plan how to defeat Na'vi people. He misses his brother so much. He feels pain whenever he sees Neytiri face. There were so many comrades who died during the war. Therefore he decides to take down Na'vi world.
Neytiri : Neytiri is brave, loyal and strong willed. She is willing to put herself in a dangerous situation for the sake of her clan. She realizes that Jake was a traitor the the Na'vi, not the Sky people but she was loving Jake so she couldn't tell her clan about him and couldn't attack him. Her parents are good leaders but her father died during the war between the humans and Na'vi. She believes that her mother is the only one who can leads Na'vi clan.
Beginning : Human world were attacked by a giant Na'vi race. They just wanted to take over the whole land so they can extend their land. Humans and Na'vi people had a war many times and so many marines were killed. Marines kept trying to defeat Na'vi and protect the world but they were too weak to beat them. Na'vi took so many things away from humans and especially Jake Sully. There's a marine Jake Sully who has been planned to defeat the Na'vi and planned to revenge on Neytiri.
Middle : Jake only can uses his right arm but when he is on avatar, he got his own legs and own arms as well. When he was on avatar, he saved Neytiri's mother once on purpose so he could get close to Na'vi people and especially Neytiri. He told them that he's a human and he betrayed humans. Na'vi people were shocked but they trust him because he told them the truth and he saved Neytiri's mother who is a clan leader. Neytiri was told to teach Jake how to fight against humans and as day passed she became to love Jake.
Characters : Jake Sully , Neytiri
Jake Sully : Courageous, determines, passionate. He lost his legs and left arm and his younger brother when he was a child. He begins to plan how to defeat Na'vi people. He misses his brother so much. He feels pain whenever he sees Neytiri face. There were so many comrades who died during the war. Therefore he decides to take down Na'vi world.
Neytiri : Neytiri is brave, loyal and strong willed. She is willing to put herself in a dangerous situation for the sake of her clan. She realizes that Jake was a traitor the the Na'vi, not the Sky people but she was loving Jake so she couldn't tell her clan about him and couldn't attack him. Her parents are good leaders but her father died during the war between the humans and Na'vi. She believes that her mother is the only one who can leads Na'vi clan.
Beginning : Human world were attacked by a giant Na'vi race. They just wanted to take over the whole land so they can extend their land. Humans and Na'vi people had a war many times and so many marines were killed. Marines kept trying to defeat Na'vi and protect the world but they were too weak to beat them. Na'vi took so many things away from humans and especially Jake Sully. There's a marine Jake Sully who has been planned to defeat the Na'vi and planned to revenge on Neytiri.
Middle : Jake only can uses his right arm but when he is on avatar, he got his own legs and own arms as well. When he was on avatar, he saved Neytiri's mother once on purpose so he could get close to Na'vi people and especially Neytiri. He told them that he's a human and he betrayed humans. Na'vi people were shocked but they trust him because he told them the truth and he saved Neytiri's mother who is a clan leader. Neytiri was told to teach Jake how to fight against humans and as day passed she became to love Jake.
End : Jake learned everything about Na'vi and got the information about Na'vi clan. After he got informations, he was hiding top of the trees and shoot the arrow at Neytiri then ran away. She died and then all the Na'vi people are shocked and they are panic. Now they are in danger.
Hey Brian, it would be nice if you could explain more about your story. I don't really understand what your story is going to be about. Seeing Jake Sully is a character from the movie 'Avatar' I belive this will be something from that storyline.
ReplyDeleteThanks for telling me. I wasn't sure what we supposed to write at the first time but I found out what to write.
Deletelets see more of how this develops
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