Friday, 24 August 2012
Jordyn's Final Fan-Fiction
"That's all you'll ever be! A Muggle! Nothing but a muggle!"
The words echoed in the young man's head as he sat by the river crying. Growing up in a magic family, it was taken for granted that he would make it into Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, the best magic school in Britain. However, things had turned out different from what he expected when he opened the letter from Professor Minerva McGonagall, which she had apparently regretted sending. Why send the stupid letter then? All these thoughts swirled in Argus's head before a stern voice interrupted him.
"What are you doing outside, boy? Crying like a girl, it's no wonder even Hogwarts didn't accept you. Stop the tears, that's not going to change anything. Get inside."
Argus met his father's face with a frightened one, only daring to look away as soon as his father started walking to their house. Making sure to keep a good few metres behind him, Argus followed him home.
Ever since his mother died two years ago, the gruff but loving man he had once recognised as his father had disappeared. In its place was a cruel master, the result of grief, heartache and bottled feelings. Going only to work at the Ministry of Magic and then coming home to emotionally abuse the boy before repeating the cycle the next day, Nolan Filch was a hated and loved man to his son. At first, Argus could understand some of the reasons why his father was the way he was, but as he got older, he started to resent it. Fight back even. However, with the rejection from Hogwarts, his world came crashing down around him. With a muggle school being completely out of the question, Argus would have to stay at home, his education being completely at the mercy of his father. Knowing that Nolan Filch spent a lot of his hours at work or sleeping, Argus faced a bleak future with no friends and no education.
Years later, Argus had settled into the familiar routine of cleaning the house in the morning, going to the market to collect dinner for the evening and then spending his time by the river. Ofttimes he would watch the muggle kids wistfully, wishing he could be accepted but with the strange happenings surrounding the Filch household guaranteed that any normal person stayed away from the boy and his father. It hurt. It really did. But those who are helpless often find themselves moving on from a situation that is seemingly impossible to change, and such was the case with Argus. Getting up, he stood to look again after the group of kids before SMACK! Spluttering water from the river he just landed in, he brushed his hair aside to take a look at the brute that had knocked him over. He was surprised to see that instead, it was a girl of about the same age, who was rubbing at a very stubborn stain that refused to budge. Surprise turned to anger as he started yelling at her, telling her what a stupid, clumsy muggle she was before clapping a hand over his mouth. The girl looked at Argus for a second, before she burst out laughing. "Muggle? What on earth is a 'muggle'? I'm so sorry I wasn't looking where I was going, but if you're going to reprimand me, you ought to use better words. Such a strange boy you are!", all said with a mischievous grin on her face. Argus started. This girl thought she could just come here, knock him over and then laugh at him? He would show her, he thought. Just as he opened his mouth to start yelling at her again, she shocked him by asking if he could show her around the village. "I'm new here and I don't know anyone, but since you're such a kind boy, I think you'd do a wonderful job of showing me around", she simpered sweetly. Argus was struck. What kind, he did not know, but he knew that he wanted to stay with this girl for as long as he could.
Their friendship grew through the Summer, and for Argus, so did his love. He had never been smitten as he was with Ruth, and he thought that he could possibly marry her one day.
“Argus, what are you thinking about now?”, Ruth asked with concern. She had noticed that he had become quiet over the last few days and she didn’t know what to do about it.
“It’s okay, Ruthie, just thinking about chores that I think I might have forgotten to do.”
“Silly Argus, forget the chores, come have fun!”
Laughing, he ran after her in a game of chase-and-catch. As long as he had his best friend, everything would be okay. For now. Unfortunately, life does not leave one too long in a period of quiet and content.
While Argus spent his summer enjoying time with Ruth, Nolan’s heartbreak and grief was finally catching up with him. Hearing his son’s laugh and seeing the smile which reminded him so much of his late wife made their memories more vivid, and yet more painful. Sitting at home after work one day, he pondered his own mortality in the quiet, before it was broken with a scream. Scrambling from his chair, he rushed to the river where the noise came from and saw his son’s friend Ruth covered in blood.
“She fell on the rocks! Help her, Dad! HELP HER!”
Tripping over the rocks, he rushed over to the two teenagers. As he reached them, he saw the damage that had been done.
“Son, I can’t do anything. She’s…The damage is too much. No magic can save this amount of damage.”
Argus made a sound that would have made a lion run. He had never known such grief, not even when his mother had died. Looking wildly around, he spotted a stoat lurking nearby. His mind suddenly formed a plan. Taking deep breaths, he finally spoke.
“Dad, I need your magic. I have never asked you for anything from it, but I need it now. Turn Ruth into a cat and take her to an animal doctor. Can you grant me this one wish? I wouldn’t ask if I wasn’t desperate and you know this.”
Nolan looked at his son, and saw his wife’s same sad eyes that had become her in her final days. Looking away, he gruffly replied,
“You are asking me to take this woman away from her family and to perform a magic expressly forbidden by the Ministry of Magic. If I do this, the secret dies with us both. I will have to obliviate her family and friends to erase all memories of her existence and Ruth Watson will be no more. Do you understand what you are asking me?”
“I do.”
“Let it be done.”
Argus cried as he saw his best friend and first love’s body slowly change into that of a cat. He had loved that girl and would have married her if fate had been kind to him for once in his life. Later that day, as the father, son and cat exited the local animal doctor’s house, Nolan looked at his son.
“Argus, what will you name her?”
Argus looked shyly at his dad, before looking down at the sleeping tabby. “I could have married her one day, you know. I would like to name her Mrs. Filch, for the Ruthie and future I lost.”
“Don’t be silly, son. People will laugh. Why don’t you use your mother’s family name? That name was as good as any.”, Nolan said, not unkindly.
Argus beamed at his father, for the first time in years.
“That sounds perfect, Dad. I will call her, Mrs. Norris.”
Word Count: 1302
Wednesday, 8 August 2012
Sheldon Final Fanfic
This Fan-fiction follows the latest episode of
Teen Wolf in which Alyson’s dad finally discovers who the other Bata wolf is.
Scott is cornered by the hunters, torn with the decision to either die a human
or fight for his life as a werewolf – with the fear of losing Alyson’s heart as
she helplessly watches on.
It’s that time of the year, where every girl from
high school puts on her dress preparing to live out the one single dream of her
entire high school experience.
That time of the year where the boys suit up all spunky in hopes of getting a little action with the ladies as it maybe their last chance in high school - The annual school Formal Ball/Prom.
Its that time of the year were both guys and gals have the freedom to dance the night away as if it was the last night of their lives with no care in the world.
That time of the year where the boys suit up all spunky in hopes of getting a little action with the ladies as it maybe their last chance in high school - The annual school Formal Ball/Prom.
Its that time of the year were both guys and gals have the freedom to dance the night away as if it was the last night of their lives with no care in the world.
As the night seemingly progressed, Alyson and
Scott more got closer as they slowly dance to the ever sweet jam’s, all the
while growing more intimate and affectionate.
Alyson turns to Scott and says;
“You wana get outta here?”
‘’Yea, what do you have in mind?” he replied.
She responded, “You’ll see” with a flirty promiscuous smile on her face.
Alyson turns to Scott and says;
“You wana get outta here?”
‘’Yea, what do you have in mind?” he replied.
She responded, “You’ll see” with a flirty promiscuous smile on her face.
So there they are, walking out of the school auditorium,
leaving the dance party. Foolishly kissing and groping on each other as young
couples do when they’re in love. They eventually reach a spot where they can
act intimately as they approach the lean up against the paralleled walls of the
narrow locker covered halls of their high school. She runs on ahead to the
middle of the hallway teasing him of what’s to come. She takes a good look at
him waiting in anticipation, so he phsycs himself up to get ready for the night
of his life.
Just before he turns to walk towards her, black clothed men armed with artillery weapons block off the hallway from both ends. Facing directly towards Scott who is just standing there unaware of what’s going to happen next.
Both ends have 5 hunters each ready to activate. They begin to walk steadily and focused to kill, the tensed emotions begin to spark.
Just before he turns to walk towards her, black clothed men armed with artillery weapons block off the hallway from both ends. Facing directly towards Scott who is just standing there unaware of what’s going to happen next.
Both ends have 5 hunters each ready to activate. They begin to walk steadily and focused to kill, the tensed emotions begin to spark.
Alyson looks on frighten and confused of what’s
going on, fearing for Scott who could possible get hurt, while Scott looks back
and fourth at her and the hunters as if he has everything under control.
Suddenly in a moment both teams of the hunters take off and break free, aggressively
running towards Scott. With Scott cornered in, having no where to run – both
teams jam up in filling up the space of the narrow paved high school hall way.
Just before they collide and crash furiously, Scott’s
heart rate had already breached the limit of a normal human being activating
his inner beast. So as they collided he un-humanly leaps high forcing the
hunters to stop in their tracks. Landing on the on top of the lockers
overlooking the hallway with Alyson right across/opposite him and both teams of
hunters blocking the way from going both left or right.
But with his werewolf form taking shape,
revealing his true self to Allyson who is shocked, emotionally distraught and
confused. Confused about that the love of her life is the very
thing/creature that her family has been hunting for centuries.
To her amazement Alyson steers at him, gripped
with fear of the fact that her boyfriend (the first person she’s has ever
fallen in love with) is well and truly not human but a Werewolf.
Scott helplessly looks at her in his Werewolf
state only to slowly turn back to normal as his heart rate drops back as he
sees her (the only one that can keep his abilities intact.)
He whispers to her
the only words that could possibly think of.
“I LOVE YOU”
She looks at him with tear filled eyes, lifting
her hand upwards, while he Leaps off and bursts through the ceiling making his
own exit, just before Alyson’s father and the other hunters shot him with their deadly bullets.
Alyson filled with emotion, slowly walks out the high
school hall way outside drowsy still in shock of what she just witnessed.
Faintly drops into her fathers arms who whispers to her
“It’s going to be
ok”
As he looks out into the distance with only one
thing on his mind – Kill Scott McColl.
As the night eventually fades away, Scott – not
knowing what to do, flees to the forest (the place where he was first bitten)
he
begins to holler and shout
“NO”
in pain thinking that Alyson hates him
after seeing the beast, as his frustration builds, all the screaming and
hollering starts to grow into howling.
Meanwhile Alyson and her father drive home from
the school. Her father tries to explain what happened and begins to give her a
big lecture on how dangerous Scott is and warns her to stay away from him.
Subtly ignoring him, she slips into her own little world. Looking out the
window replaying what just happen, over and over again.
She begins to question herself.
Why didn’t he tell me?
He’s a liar!
Do I still Love him?
Arghh how can I love him when he’s a Warewolf?
Is he really the same Scott?
All these thoughts start to run in her mind but
one thing’s still remains . . .
She can’t help but love him.
WORD COUNT: 920
Monday, 6 August 2012
Sheldon 5 fanfic links
Fanfic links...
1. Vampire Diaries
In this fancfic, the author continues the story from the end of season 3 Where Elena is finally on the verge of becoming a vampire after 3 whole seasons.
The author takes it from Elena's perspective, as she paints the opening scene with an intimate exchange between Stefan and Elena. As Stefans mourns in sorrow, fearing that hes stripped her of whats rightfully hers. . . her humanity. ''If only I saved her first" he questions in his mind, she wouldn't be forced to come to the realization of her loss of humanity.
The author continues with the dialogue showcasing Elena tearfully fighting with herself as she vocally tugs between the two sides.
The life experience she will miss as a human and the never aging life as a forever condemnd vampire.
This fanfic was quite a good read. A realistic take on what could actually happen in the next season. An emotional but detailed dialogue that you could totally see happen. Overall considering this was the writers first attempted it was an interesting read and worth developing.
2. Alphas
In this fanfic the author adds in a scene in the opening episode of season 2. he writes from Gary's perspective which is written in first person, which I actually think is probably the best way to write if your going from Gary's point of view. As it best fits/describes his way of thinking or his overall character.
In the fanfic, Gary is coming to grips with what happen to him in building 7 and moving on as he converses with himself trying to put together the missing pieces of his memory. Bill walks in and tries to compel his sympthay and guilt. In the end they walk away together in harmony...
I like the concept of the 1st person take as well as the developing friendship between he and bill but to me it just seemed to plain and boring. with not much work out into the actually relationship it kin of comes across little dull and plain. tome there could have been more of a so called development.
3. The Newsroom
I really loved this piece of fanfic, firstly because the author wrote a scene based on the relationship of the anchor Will and producer Mac. The author's take on it portrayed what every 'Newsroom' fan always wanted - the intimate connection to finally happen between Will and Mac.
The writer simply just adds to and develops on an existing moment in an episode where we find Mac in Will's office, in hope for a chance to reconnect what was once there - love. She looks around as she battles her own mind thinking he could never forgive her but at the same time hoping maybe one day it could happen again. Will eventually walks in the room, they talk closely only for him to unexpectedly open up to her and lean in to kiss her, which is exactly what she secretly wanted.
I enjoyed reading this fanfic because every fan of this show will tell you how much they love these two characters. Emotions have been building up since the first episode and they two characters FINALLY get back together (in some way). As a consistant viewer, you could see how this could realisticly play out in the actual show. really worth while read.
4. Breakout Kings
This is a drama about 3 convicts given an opportunity to work alongside a special forces unit in order to capture highly dangerous criminals. The thing is, what better way to catch a criminal then someone who knows exactly what and how they would do it. In return they get time reduced off their sentence.
In this fanfic the writer takes a small part or snapshot of a scene and develops it further, into something audiences would actually want to see. Lloyd and Julianne are found alone. They eventually do what fans have always craved ... An intimate encounter.
The writer is very detailed and incredibly descriptive which allows the reader to really cling and grip onto what the writer is trying to portray. It certainly does create a vivid and accurate picture in the readers head of exactly how the scene would play out. An interesting read need to say with very detailed components that I believe for a writer doing such piece.
5.Smallville
An interesting take on clark Kent's first love. A perspective that i personally loved, because as a follower of the series, over the years I've always wanted something to come about of these two characters. An actual scene that showed the epitome of their love. Thats exactly what the author has done here. The writter has written a scene that showcased their love for each other which was never really fully portrayed in the actual TV series.
Creativity was a hit in playing out the scene, setting the mood depicting the characters etc. but i think they could have gone further in actual content and plot.
interesting read for sure though.
1. Vampire Diaries
The author takes it from Elena's perspective, as she paints the opening scene with an intimate exchange between Stefan and Elena. As Stefans mourns in sorrow, fearing that hes stripped her of whats rightfully hers. . . her humanity. ''If only I saved her first" he questions in his mind, she wouldn't be forced to come to the realization of her loss of humanity.
The author continues with the dialogue showcasing Elena tearfully fighting with herself as she vocally tugs between the two sides.
The life experience she will miss as a human and the never aging life as a forever condemnd vampire.
This fanfic was quite a good read. A realistic take on what could actually happen in the next season. An emotional but detailed dialogue that you could totally see happen. Overall considering this was the writers first attempted it was an interesting read and worth developing.
2. Alphas
In the fanfic, Gary is coming to grips with what happen to him in building 7 and moving on as he converses with himself trying to put together the missing pieces of his memory. Bill walks in and tries to compel his sympthay and guilt. In the end they walk away together in harmony...
I like the concept of the 1st person take as well as the developing friendship between he and bill but to me it just seemed to plain and boring. with not much work out into the actually relationship it kin of comes across little dull and plain. tome there could have been more of a so called development.
3. The Newsroom
The writer simply just adds to and develops on an existing moment in an episode where we find Mac in Will's office, in hope for a chance to reconnect what was once there - love. She looks around as she battles her own mind thinking he could never forgive her but at the same time hoping maybe one day it could happen again. Will eventually walks in the room, they talk closely only for him to unexpectedly open up to her and lean in to kiss her, which is exactly what she secretly wanted.
I enjoyed reading this fanfic because every fan of this show will tell you how much they love these two characters. Emotions have been building up since the first episode and they two characters FINALLY get back together (in some way). As a consistant viewer, you could see how this could realisticly play out in the actual show. really worth while read.
4. Breakout Kings
In this fanfic the writer takes a small part or snapshot of a scene and develops it further, into something audiences would actually want to see. Lloyd and Julianne are found alone. They eventually do what fans have always craved ... An intimate encounter.
The writer is very detailed and incredibly descriptive which allows the reader to really cling and grip onto what the writer is trying to portray. It certainly does create a vivid and accurate picture in the readers head of exactly how the scene would play out. An interesting read need to say with very detailed components that I believe for a writer doing such piece.
5.Smallville
Creativity was a hit in playing out the scene, setting the mood depicting the characters etc. but i think they could have gone further in actual content and plot.
interesting read for sure though.
Saturday, 4 August 2012
Sheldon Fanfic (draft)
This Fan-fiction follows an episode of Teen Wolf
from season 2 in which Alyson’s dad finally discovers who the other Alpha wolf
is.
As scott begins to grow fearful as the hunters draw closer each moment and of the implications of the decision he will eventually have to make. the decision to finally reveal who/what he really is and fight for his life as a werewolf or die helplessly as human teenager all the while putting alyson's heart and inner feelings at risk.
As scott begins to grow fearful as the hunters draw closer each moment and of the implications of the decision he will eventually have to make. the decision to finally reveal who/what he really is and fight for his life as a werewolf or die helplessly as human teenager all the while putting alyson's heart and inner feelings at risk.
It’s that time of the year, where every girl from
school puts on her dress preparing to live out the dream of her entire high
school experience. That time of the year where the boys suit up all spunky in
hopes of getting a little action with the ladies as it maybe their last chance
in high school - The annual school Formal Ball/Prom. Its that time of the year
were both guys and gals have the freedom to dance the night away as if it was
the last night of their lives.
As the night seemingly progressed, Alyson and
Scott got closer as they slowly danced to the ever sweet melodies, all the
while growing more intimate and affectionate. Alyson turns to Scott and says;
“You wana get outta this place?”
‘’Yea, what do you have in mind?” he replied.
She responded, “You’ll see” with a flirty promiscuous smile on her face.
“You wana get outta this place?”
‘’Yea, what do you have in mind?” he replied.
She responded, “You’ll see” with a flirty promiscuous smile on her face.
Friday, 3 August 2012
Jordyn's Fan Fiction (draft)
In the beginning...
Outline - Argus Filch was born into the world with eyes wide open, watchful of his surroundings. Named for being alert, this trait often got him on the wrong side of people, his father most of all. With his mother's death, a strained relationship with his father and rejection from the world that meant the most to him, it is not long before Argus is ready to give everything up. Until the summer that he met Ruth...
Characters:
Argus Filch - main character, loner, strained relationship with father, squib
Nolan Filch - Father, works at Ministry of Magic, strained relationship with son, magic
Irene Filch (nee Norris) - Mother, deceased, magic
Ruth Watson - moves into the same town as the Filch family, friend of Argus, muggle
Story told using third person.
-------------------------------------------
Beginning: "That's all you'll ever be! A Muggle! Nothing but a muggle!"
The words echoed in the young man's head as he sat by the river crying. Growing up in a magic family, it was taken for granted that he would make it into Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, the best magic school in Britain. However, things had turned out different from what he expected when he opened the letter from Professor Minerva McGonagall, which she had apparently regretted sending. Why send the stupid letter then? All these thoughts swirled in Argus's head before a stern voice interrupted him.
"What are you doing outside, boy? Crying like a girl, it's no wonder even Hogwarts didn't accept you. Stop the tears, that's not going to change anything. Get inside."
Argus met his father's face with a frightened one, only daring to look away as soon as his father started walking to their house. Making sure to keep a good few metres behind him, Argus followed him home. Ever since his mother died two years ago, the gruff but loving man he had once recognised as his father had disappeared. In its place was a cruel master, the result of grief, heartache and bottled feelings. Going only to work at the Ministry of Magic and then coming home to emotionally abuse the boy before repeating the cycle the next day, Nolan Filch was a hated and loved man to his son. At first, Argus could understand some of the reasons why his father was the way he was, but as he got older, he started to resent it. Fight back even. However, with the rejection from Hogwarts, his world came crashing down around him. With a muggle school being completely out of the question, Argus would have to stay at home, his education being completely at the mercy of his father. Knowing that Nolan Filch spent a lot of his hours at work or sleeping, Argus faced a bleak future with no friends and no education. (need to find a way to end this properly and link to Middle part)
Middle: Meets Ruth Watson who becomes his only friend. Argus falls in love with her but an accident happens that leaves them both dying; Father's heartbreak catching up with him - getting more ill.
Years later, Argus had settled into the familiar routine of cleaning the house in the morning, going to the market to collect dinner for the evening and then spending his time by the river. Ofttimes he would watch the muggle kids wistfully, wishing he could be accepted but with the strange happenings surrounding the Filch household guaranteed that any normal person stayed away from the boy and his father. It hurt. It really did. But those who are helpless often find themselves moving on from a situation that is seemingly impossible to change, and such was the case with Argus. Getting up, he stood to look again after the group of kids before SMACK! Spluttering water from the river he just landed in, he brushed his hair aside to take a look at the brute that had knocked him over. He was surprised to see that instead, it was a girl of about the same age, who was rubbing at a very stubborn stain that refused to budge. Surprise turned to anger as he started yelling at her, telling her what a stupid, clumsy muggle she was before clapping a hand over his mouth. The girl looked at Argus for a second, before she burst out laughing. "Muggle? What on earth is a 'muggle'? I'm so sorry I wasn't looking where I was going, but if you're going to reprimand me, you ought to use better words. Such a strange boy you are!", all said with a mischievous grin on her face. Argus started. This girl thought she could just come here, knock him over and then laugh at him? He would show her, he thought. Just as he opened his mouth to start yelling at her again, she shocked him by asking if he could show her around the village. "I'm new here and I don't know anyone, but since you're such a kind boy, I think you'd do a wonderful job of showing me around", she simpered sweetly. Argus was struck. What kind, he did not know, but he knew that he wanted to stay with this girl for as long as he could.
- meets Ruth Watson who has just moved into the village
- signs of his father's illness
- need to establish the age(?) maybe not so important
- friendship formed on keeping an eye out for each other (like canon Filch and Mrs. Norris)
Ending: Argus recovers but Ruth still in coma. Father's last act of penance to son is to save Ruth's life through Transfiguration, which will change her body to something easier to fix. She becomes a cat, but social norms which are against human transfiguration means that Argus must hide her identity. Taking on his mother's maiden name, and in the token that their love was good enough to be husband and wife, Ruth becomes Mrs. Norris the cat, Argus Filch's lifelong companion.
Outline - Argus Filch was born into the world with eyes wide open, watchful of his surroundings. Named for being alert, this trait often got him on the wrong side of people, his father most of all. With his mother's death, a strained relationship with his father and rejection from the world that meant the most to him, it is not long before Argus is ready to give everything up. Until the summer that he met Ruth...
Characters:
Argus Filch - main character, loner, strained relationship with father, squib
Nolan Filch - Father, works at Ministry of Magic, strained relationship with son, magic
Irene Filch (nee Norris) - Mother, deceased, magic
Ruth Watson - moves into the same town as the Filch family, friend of Argus, muggle
Story told using third person.
-------------------------------------------
Beginning: "That's all you'll ever be! A Muggle! Nothing but a muggle!"
The words echoed in the young man's head as he sat by the river crying. Growing up in a magic family, it was taken for granted that he would make it into Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, the best magic school in Britain. However, things had turned out different from what he expected when he opened the letter from Professor Minerva McGonagall, which she had apparently regretted sending. Why send the stupid letter then? All these thoughts swirled in Argus's head before a stern voice interrupted him.
"What are you doing outside, boy? Crying like a girl, it's no wonder even Hogwarts didn't accept you. Stop the tears, that's not going to change anything. Get inside."
Argus met his father's face with a frightened one, only daring to look away as soon as his father started walking to their house. Making sure to keep a good few metres behind him, Argus followed him home. Ever since his mother died two years ago, the gruff but loving man he had once recognised as his father had disappeared. In its place was a cruel master, the result of grief, heartache and bottled feelings. Going only to work at the Ministry of Magic and then coming home to emotionally abuse the boy before repeating the cycle the next day, Nolan Filch was a hated and loved man to his son. At first, Argus could understand some of the reasons why his father was the way he was, but as he got older, he started to resent it. Fight back even. However, with the rejection from Hogwarts, his world came crashing down around him. With a muggle school being completely out of the question, Argus would have to stay at home, his education being completely at the mercy of his father. Knowing that Nolan Filch spent a lot of his hours at work or sleeping, Argus faced a bleak future with no friends and no education. (need to find a way to end this properly and link to Middle part)
Middle: Meets Ruth Watson who becomes his only friend. Argus falls in love with her but an accident happens that leaves them both dying; Father's heartbreak catching up with him - getting more ill.
Years later, Argus had settled into the familiar routine of cleaning the house in the morning, going to the market to collect dinner for the evening and then spending his time by the river. Ofttimes he would watch the muggle kids wistfully, wishing he could be accepted but with the strange happenings surrounding the Filch household guaranteed that any normal person stayed away from the boy and his father. It hurt. It really did. But those who are helpless often find themselves moving on from a situation that is seemingly impossible to change, and such was the case with Argus. Getting up, he stood to look again after the group of kids before SMACK! Spluttering water from the river he just landed in, he brushed his hair aside to take a look at the brute that had knocked him over. He was surprised to see that instead, it was a girl of about the same age, who was rubbing at a very stubborn stain that refused to budge. Surprise turned to anger as he started yelling at her, telling her what a stupid, clumsy muggle she was before clapping a hand over his mouth. The girl looked at Argus for a second, before she burst out laughing. "Muggle? What on earth is a 'muggle'? I'm so sorry I wasn't looking where I was going, but if you're going to reprimand me, you ought to use better words. Such a strange boy you are!", all said with a mischievous grin on her face. Argus started. This girl thought she could just come here, knock him over and then laugh at him? He would show her, he thought. Just as he opened his mouth to start yelling at her again, she shocked him by asking if he could show her around the village. "I'm new here and I don't know anyone, but since you're such a kind boy, I think you'd do a wonderful job of showing me around", she simpered sweetly. Argus was struck. What kind, he did not know, but he knew that he wanted to stay with this girl for as long as he could.
- meets Ruth Watson who has just moved into the village
- signs of his father's illness
- need to establish the age(?) maybe not so important
- friendship formed on keeping an eye out for each other (like canon Filch and Mrs. Norris)
Ending: Argus recovers but Ruth still in coma. Father's last act of penance to son is to save Ruth's life through Transfiguration, which will change her body to something easier to fix. She becomes a cat, but social norms which are against human transfiguration means that Argus must hide her identity. Taking on his mother's maiden name, and in the token that their love was good enough to be husband and wife, Ruth becomes Mrs. Norris the cat, Argus Filch's lifelong companion.
Friday, 20 July 2012
Lavinia's Fan Fiction (draft)
Based on 'The Mentalist' Television series. Using one of my fan fiction links about the TV series as the core inspiration of my narrative/first brief.
Style:- Detective Fiction/ Detective Drama
Setting:- Sacramento, CBI headquarters
Title:- Dirty Cop
Plot:- Patrick Jane and the CBI (California Bureu of Investigation) team investigates a death of a young girl. When Patrick Jane suspects the Shierff is a dirty cop, before he could tell Lisbon and the team Jane is taken hostage but using his mind games and closely observing his surroundings is able to give Lisbon and the CBI team a headups of his where a bouts. But it doesn't stop there, Jane finds an anonymous parcel on his desk with a note reading: "Let the games begin"...
Outline:-
Begining:- A young girl is found dead by a young lady during her morning run, Patrick Jane and the CBI team are on the case to find the reason for this young girls death and most importantly the killer.
As the investigation proceeds, Jane has a strong feeling that something is not right in the CBI headquarters but decides to keep his thoughts to himself until he believes his feeling is right. Throughout the investigation working together with the CBI team, Jane has come to a conclusion that there is someone within the investigation that is purposely making mistakes within the investigation and tells Agent, Teresa Lisbon.
Now, with the idea of someone ruining the chances of solving the investigation, Lisbon informs the team to work carefully. Jane working his magic finds out that the Shierff is working together with an anonymous individual but before Jane could reach Lisbon to inform her about the Shierff, he is knocked out from behind.
Middle:- Waking up with a major headache, Jane looks around, tries to move his hands to find it his cuffed to a pole, trying to focuss Jane tries his best to remember what had happen to him but before he could come to a possible solution, he hears a cry from across the room. A young girl. Jane hears a car pull up, he closes his eyes and pretends that he is still unconcious. He hears footsteps. Door unlocks. Footsteps comning down the stairs. He listens out to hear the voice of this person and to his suprise it is the voice of the Shierff.
"Stop your crying sweetie. Do you want to end up like your friend?" The shierff laughs.
Jane hears sounds of footsteps coming closer and closer towards him.
However, back at CBI headquaters Lisbon is curious of the whereabouts of Patrick Jane, constantly calling his cellphone. Asking Van Pelt, Cho and Rigsby if they've seen him. Lisbon checking her phone once again, realises she had miss calls from Jane. Checking her voicemail she finds a clue to where Jane could be.
Jane had left Lisbon a message but before he could finsh his sentence she hears a thumb and the Shierff's voice. Thinking back to what he had told her about 'someone' messing with the investigation it is not long before Lisbon click that the Shierff is the insider.
Lisbon and the team working on finding Jane, back at the basement Jane is talking with the young lady across the room trying to get some information about her and the story behind the death of her friend.
The Shierff is gun down, Jane uncuffed.
"What took you so long" he asks Lisbon
Heading back to headquarters for questioning.
Ending:- The Sheriff is taken back to the CBI headquarters for questioning but the team cannot get anything out of him. From a hardworking town Sheriff to a quiet and 'in his own world' the team is worried about him. Whilst this is happening the girl from the basement, Ana, is in shock, trying her best to tell Jane what she can remember. In the end, after making the CBI teams work difficult, The Sheriff mutters something with a dirty grin on his face. A frustrated Lisbon slams her hands on the table ,
"So now you want to talk?"
With that dirty grin on his face, he mutters
"This is just the beginning, we're just getting started"
Confessing to the murder of the young girl, the Sheriff is taken to the cells. Jane still seriously thinking about what the Sheriff said in the questioning room, he sees a parcel on his desk, walking back to the office he sees a brown parcel on his desk with a note reading: "Let the games begin"...
End of story.
Characters:-
Main Characters:
Patrick Jane
Teresa Lisbon
Shierff Hardy
Co-Characters:
Grace Van Pelt
Kimball Cho
Wayne Rigsby
Lina (Victim)
Style:- Detective Fiction/ Detective Drama
Setting:- Sacramento, CBI headquarters
Title:- Dirty Cop
Plot:- Patrick Jane and the CBI (California Bureu of Investigation) team investigates a death of a young girl. When Patrick Jane suspects the Shierff is a dirty cop, before he could tell Lisbon and the team Jane is taken hostage but using his mind games and closely observing his surroundings is able to give Lisbon and the CBI team a headups of his where a bouts. But it doesn't stop there, Jane finds an anonymous parcel on his desk with a note reading: "Let the games begin"...
Outline:-
Begining:- A young girl is found dead by a young lady during her morning run, Patrick Jane and the CBI team are on the case to find the reason for this young girls death and most importantly the killer.
As the investigation proceeds, Jane has a strong feeling that something is not right in the CBI headquarters but decides to keep his thoughts to himself until he believes his feeling is right. Throughout the investigation working together with the CBI team, Jane has come to a conclusion that there is someone within the investigation that is purposely making mistakes within the investigation and tells Agent, Teresa Lisbon.
Now, with the idea of someone ruining the chances of solving the investigation, Lisbon informs the team to work carefully. Jane working his magic finds out that the Shierff is working together with an anonymous individual but before Jane could reach Lisbon to inform her about the Shierff, he is knocked out from behind.
Middle:- Waking up with a major headache, Jane looks around, tries to move his hands to find it his cuffed to a pole, trying to focuss Jane tries his best to remember what had happen to him but before he could come to a possible solution, he hears a cry from across the room. A young girl. Jane hears a car pull up, he closes his eyes and pretends that he is still unconcious. He hears footsteps. Door unlocks. Footsteps comning down the stairs. He listens out to hear the voice of this person and to his suprise it is the voice of the Shierff.
"Stop your crying sweetie. Do you want to end up like your friend?" The shierff laughs.
Jane hears sounds of footsteps coming closer and closer towards him.
However, back at CBI headquaters Lisbon is curious of the whereabouts of Patrick Jane, constantly calling his cellphone. Asking Van Pelt, Cho and Rigsby if they've seen him. Lisbon checking her phone once again, realises she had miss calls from Jane. Checking her voicemail she finds a clue to where Jane could be.
Jane had left Lisbon a message but before he could finsh his sentence she hears a thumb and the Shierff's voice. Thinking back to what he had told her about 'someone' messing with the investigation it is not long before Lisbon click that the Shierff is the insider.
Lisbon and the team working on finding Jane, back at the basement Jane is talking with the young lady across the room trying to get some information about her and the story behind the death of her friend.
The Shierff is gun down, Jane uncuffed.
"What took you so long" he asks Lisbon
Heading back to headquarters for questioning.
Ending:- The Sheriff is taken back to the CBI headquarters for questioning but the team cannot get anything out of him. From a hardworking town Sheriff to a quiet and 'in his own world' the team is worried about him. Whilst this is happening the girl from the basement, Ana, is in shock, trying her best to tell Jane what she can remember. In the end, after making the CBI teams work difficult, The Sheriff mutters something with a dirty grin on his face. A frustrated Lisbon slams her hands on the table ,
"So now you want to talk?"
With that dirty grin on his face, he mutters
"This is just the beginning, we're just getting started"
Confessing to the murder of the young girl, the Sheriff is taken to the cells. Jane still seriously thinking about what the Sheriff said in the questioning room, he sees a parcel on his desk, walking back to the office he sees a brown parcel on his desk with a note reading: "Let the games begin"...
End of story.
Characters:-
Main Characters:
Patrick Jane
Teresa Lisbon
Shierff Hardy
Co-Characters:
Grace Van Pelt
Kimball Cho
Wayne Rigsby
Lina (Victim)
Lavinia's Final Fan Fiction
It was a bright and early morning; the birds were singing
and the smell of fresh hot cinnamon rolls had taken over in the Bidwell-Sacramento
River State Park, it was just like every other ordinary morning. But for one
individual this was a morning she will never forget.
“AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!”
Birds flapping their wings carelessly scared out of the
trees, people within the park have come to a halt
“It’s a body, a dead body”
Hours later, Senior agent Teresa Lisbon and the CBI team
have arrived on site together with the Sacramento Police Department. The body
laid on the green grass helpless, her colour faded with a twisted rope tied
around her neck. All of sudden a the sound of a car engine approached the crime
scene, it stopped, the car door opened then closed
“Good Morning isn’t it Lisbon” Jane greeted the Senior
Agent
“Oops, not for her, she must’ve had a bad night” he sarcastically
adds on
Lisbon rolling her eyes, gets up from the body and
explains to Jane the situation and that supposedly it could have been a
suicide. But Jane was positive that it was more than a suicide
“No, this was a cover up, the rope doesn’t match the size
of the bruising around her neck and there is signs of struggle” Jane clearly
stated out
It was like Lisbon was told dogs could talk, her face
full of surprise and shock she questioned Jane’s observation
“You’ve only been here a minute and you got all that from
just a glimpse of the victim. Are you sure?!”
Before Jane could answer he was cut off
“This could be nothing?” Lisbon added
Jane shrugged his shoulders and turned to the Sheriff
“What do you think Sheriff?”
“Well…well…well…”
Before the Sheriff could finish off his answer Jane turns
round to Lisbon
“There you go, the Sheriff isn’t sure therefore there is
more to this than meets the eye”
The Sheriff looking at his fellow police officers with confusion
did not argue with Jane’s answer and continued to keep the public off the crime
scene. Back at CBI headquarters, the investigation continued but Jane had a gut
feeling that something was not right
“There is something fishy here.” He suggested
Lisbon once again looked at Jane with a confused look
“It’s an investigation, we don’t have all the answers so
of course there something not right, we don’t know who the killer is”
As the team works hard to find the answer to the murder
of this young lady, they come across an old file that was similar to their investigation.
The feeling of getting closer to the answer the team informed Lisbon about
their findings, and Lisbon set off with Cho, Rigsby and Van-Pelt to get to the
bottom of this. But Jane had other thoughts.
Walking towards the CBI kitchen area he got random flash
backs when he was a so called ‘medium’ and remembered that he had come across a
mother of one of the young girl who supposedly committed suicide. He remembered
that the mother explained her daughter was full of joy and loved everyone
around her, she did not see any signs of depression or behavior that her
daughter could be unhappy.
It was a light bulb had been turned on in Jane’s head, he
quickly walked back to Van-Pelt’s desk and printed out the old files found on a
killer called ‘One Stop Killer’. Searching through all the old folders about
these murders he came across a photo at one of the crime scenes. In the
background of the picture he came across something odd.
“I knew it” He sprung
Jane quickly grabbed his phone out of his pocket
*Lisbon’s answering machine* “This is Teresa Lisbon…”
Jane replies “Lisbon, I have something…”
“…Please leave a message and I shall get back to you as
soon as possible” the answering machine continued
*SMACK*
With continuous thumping like pains in his head, Jane
tries to remember what had happen, he feels cheeks pressed against the solid,
ice cold concrete, he slowly opens his eyes. Vision blurry, he swiftly gets up
to find that his hands are tied to a pipe. He looks around only to discover
that he was kidnapped. Continuously shaking his head he finally became aware of
his surroundings.
“Where am I?” Jane queried
Suddenly Jane could hear a vehicle pull in. The car door
slammed and the sound of footsteps was approaching briefly. Jane watching the
door like a tiger watching his prey, the basement door opened. Rusty brown
coloured boots appeared; step by step the body of this anonymous individual
appeared.
Jane keeping his eye on the individual, he approached
Jane but his face was covered by the shadows, he took his cigarette out of his
mouth tossed it towards Jane, crouched down in front of him
“Sheriff??” Jane said with disbelief
Back at headquarters, Lisbon had found clues left behind
by Jane as well as the photo at the crime scene the Sheriff standing in the
distance off duty. Without hesitation Lisbon and the team rushed to find Jane
and the Sheriff.
Jane enquired “Why me? What are going to do with me”
“You’re in the way” the Sheriff furiously replied
Basement doors open, two heads pop from under the doors
“HANDS UP!”
Shocked the Sheriff gripped on to Jane putting the gun to
his head
“LISBON!” Jane yelled out
*BANG BANG*
Lisbon pulled the trigger, piercing two bullets through
the Sheriff’s leg, Jane running towards Lisbon, Van-Pelt walks speedily towards
the Sheriff but before she could reach him, he gave Van-Pelt a defiant smirk,
place the gun to his head
*BANG*
Back at the CBI headquarters, they are close the case
with the Sheriff accused as the young girls killer, when Jane noticed a brown
box package on his desk, he walks over only to find a mysterious note which
reads
“This is only the beginning.
J”
Word Count: 990
Brian's Final Fan Fiction
"What do we do now?!"
"Na'vi people are going to take over the whole land soon!!" all the marines yelling.
Human world were attacked by Na'vi race so many times because Na'vi people wanted to extend their land. So many of marines were killed by Na'vi. Humans kept trying to defeat them but they were too strong and too big. Also marines didn't have information about Na'vi people and Na'vi people were too fast as well. They dodge every missiles.
"Let me handle this!! I'm Jake Sully and I've been planning for this" suddenly one of the marine shouted.
"I've an idea to defeat Na'vi clan and I have a reason to defeat Na'vi"
"What is it" marine leader said
"Neytiri who broke my left arm and killed my younger brother when I was child"
Jake shared his ideas to other marines and they agreed it. When he was on avatar, he's been training by himself. He knows about the Na'vi clan and Neytiri.
"Just wait until I get chance to get close to Neytiri...."
"then everything goes easy.."
Luckily Jake found a woman who is Neytiri's mother and she was hunting. Jake was watching quietly. Suddenly giant creatures came out and attacked Neytiri's mother. Then Jake shoots the arrow at creatures and saved her.
"Who is it?!" she was in panic
"Calm down...I'm Jake Sully and a human."
"Why did you save me! you monster!"
"I'm not going to hurt you..I want to become one of you.."
"Can you please take me to your homeland?..." Jake carefully said
She became calm and took Jake to her homeland. All the Na'vi people were interesting in Jake and some other people were staring at him. Neytiri came to Jake and express gratitude and ask him why is he here.
"I'm human but I betrayed them and I want to become one of Na'vi."
"I really want to learn the way your life..."
"We can't just trust him!! What if he betray us later?" some Na'vi people shouted.
"Well..the only thing I can say is..I don't have a my own human body.." Jake lied.
Now Na'vi people think Jake was telling the truth and they trust Jake a bit because he saved the clan leader. All the Na'vi agreed Jake to be one of them and Neytiri was told to teach him the language and the way to live. Jake's plan goes well as he planned. Neytiri also taught him how to fight against humans. Jake told all the marines about Na'vi people fighting skills.
"We have to use poison gas to defeat Na'vi"
"Na'vi people nose is very sensitive, so their weakness is poison gas"
"....Then we can take down them easily and save our world"
As day passed...Neytiri became to love Jake but she sensed something is going wrong. She started to doubt him and she found out that Jake lied to Na'vi but she was in love with Jake already so she couldn't tell her clan about Jake. She was keeping the secret by herself. She also knew that Jake is going to kill her soon....
"After I killed Neytiri..spread the poison gas everywhere."
"Then we can defeat them all and we will win!!" Jake said proudly.
Na'vi people were busy training and Neytiri's mother is the only one who can leads Na'vi clan but Neytiri's mother thinks Neytiri can leads the clan now so she gave all the relics to Neytiri. Jake was get angry every time when he sees Neytiri but he had to keep his expression inside.
Now Jake was hiding top of the trees and shoot the arrow when Neytiri was walking by herself then Jake came to Neytiri. She is dead. Jake was just talking to her.
"Remember me? you killed my younger brother and broke my left arm when I was child"
"I've been waiting for today..I feel pain whenever I see you... but I finally did REVENGE"
"You don't deserve becoming Na'vi leader."
"Goodbye"
When Neytiri was found, it was too late. Na'vi people were shocked and realized that Jake killed her. They were angry and rage. Suddenly, blue capsule dropped from sky. Na'vi frightened but don't know what it is and then poison gas coming out from the capsule.
"RUN!!!Hold on your breathe! It's a poison gas" one of the Na'vi said.
"It's the sky people! they started to take us down!"
"It's Jake!!! He betrayed us, he lied to us at the beginning!!!"
All the Na'vi people fall down and their homeland was getting ruined by marines. It was unexpected attack. Some other Na'vi people who are alive, they were trying to fight against them but there were too many of them. Humans took over the homeland and Jake says....
"We did it...my plan was successful.."
"I did revenge"
"Now we can live peacefully..without war..no more fighting..no more hiding.."
Word Count : 809
"Na'vi people are going to take over the whole land soon!!" all the marines yelling.
Human world were attacked by Na'vi race so many times because Na'vi people wanted to extend their land. So many of marines were killed by Na'vi. Humans kept trying to defeat them but they were too strong and too big. Also marines didn't have information about Na'vi people and Na'vi people were too fast as well. They dodge every missiles.
"Let me handle this!! I'm Jake Sully and I've been planning for this" suddenly one of the marine shouted.
"I've an idea to defeat Na'vi clan and I have a reason to defeat Na'vi"
"What is it" marine leader said
"Neytiri who broke my left arm and killed my younger brother when I was child"
Jake shared his ideas to other marines and they agreed it. When he was on avatar, he's been training by himself. He knows about the Na'vi clan and Neytiri.
"Just wait until I get chance to get close to Neytiri...."
"then everything goes easy.."
Luckily Jake found a woman who is Neytiri's mother and she was hunting. Jake was watching quietly. Suddenly giant creatures came out and attacked Neytiri's mother. Then Jake shoots the arrow at creatures and saved her.
"Who is it?!" she was in panic
"Calm down...I'm Jake Sully and a human."
"Why did you save me! you monster!"
"I'm not going to hurt you..I want to become one of you.."
"Can you please take me to your homeland?..." Jake carefully said
She became calm and took Jake to her homeland. All the Na'vi people were interesting in Jake and some other people were staring at him. Neytiri came to Jake and express gratitude and ask him why is he here.
"I'm human but I betrayed them and I want to become one of Na'vi."
"I really want to learn the way your life..."
"We can't just trust him!! What if he betray us later?" some Na'vi people shouted.
"Well..the only thing I can say is..I don't have a my own human body.." Jake lied.
Now Na'vi people think Jake was telling the truth and they trust Jake a bit because he saved the clan leader. All the Na'vi agreed Jake to be one of them and Neytiri was told to teach him the language and the way to live. Jake's plan goes well as he planned. Neytiri also taught him how to fight against humans. Jake told all the marines about Na'vi people fighting skills.
"We have to use poison gas to defeat Na'vi"
"Na'vi people nose is very sensitive, so their weakness is poison gas"
"....Then we can take down them easily and save our world"
As day passed...Neytiri became to love Jake but she sensed something is going wrong. She started to doubt him and she found out that Jake lied to Na'vi but she was in love with Jake already so she couldn't tell her clan about Jake. She was keeping the secret by herself. She also knew that Jake is going to kill her soon....
"After I killed Neytiri..spread the poison gas everywhere."
"Then we can defeat them all and we will win!!" Jake said proudly.
Na'vi people were busy training and Neytiri's mother is the only one who can leads Na'vi clan but Neytiri's mother thinks Neytiri can leads the clan now so she gave all the relics to Neytiri. Jake was get angry every time when he sees Neytiri but he had to keep his expression inside.
Now Jake was hiding top of the trees and shoot the arrow when Neytiri was walking by herself then Jake came to Neytiri. She is dead. Jake was just talking to her.
"Remember me? you killed my younger brother and broke my left arm when I was child"
"I've been waiting for today..I feel pain whenever I see you... but I finally did REVENGE"
"You don't deserve becoming Na'vi leader."
"Goodbye"
When Neytiri was found, it was too late. Na'vi people were shocked and realized that Jake killed her. They were angry and rage. Suddenly, blue capsule dropped from sky. Na'vi frightened but don't know what it is and then poison gas coming out from the capsule.
"RUN!!!Hold on your breathe! It's a poison gas" one of the Na'vi said.
"It's the sky people! they started to take us down!"
"It's Jake!!! He betrayed us, he lied to us at the beginning!!!"
All the Na'vi people fall down and their homeland was getting ruined by marines. It was unexpected attack. Some other Na'vi people who are alive, they were trying to fight against them but there were too many of them. Humans took over the homeland and Jake says....
"We did it...my plan was successful.."
"I did revenge"
"Now we can live peacefully..without war..no more fighting..no more hiding.."
Word Count : 809
Carolyns Final Fan Fiction
From the moment I layed eyes on Indi I knew she was the one I was going to spend the rest of my life with.
My heart skips a beat, gliding up the aisle, barfoot in the hot sand, her blonde hair shimmering in the sunlight, my pulse quickens...I can't talk my eyes off of her. Her beauty is indescribable, I can't believe I am lucky enough to marry this woman that I am so madly inlove with.
Xavier my best man nudges me and winks..."You lucky, lucky man!"
"I will love you forever Indi, you take my breath away" I whisper in her ear as she stands next to me.
"I do" Indi says. "I do" I say with the biggest grin on my face.
Walking hand in hand down the aisle now a married couple we are surrounded by loved ones and their is so much excitement in the air it feels as though we've infected everyone with our happiness and love.
Ruby, my best friend stands out to me in the crowd, her eyes are bloody red and puffy. She doesn't smile at me as I walk past and I can see anger and regret written all over her face...I don't understand why.
There's no time to go see Ruby as we make our way to our getaway car, whatever it is I'm sure she's fine and I'll see her when I get back.
"Bye love's you have a great time on your honeymoon" Irene shouts over the crowd. We wave goodbye and the wind sweeps our hair back as we drive off.
"Are you ready Mrs Smith?" "I can't wait Mr smith" Indi winks at me as she's smiling. At this moment in time in our open convertible with the most stunning bride I am the happiest new groom in the world!
We step out into the warm tropical air, excited to have a few days of alone time together. We arrive in our suite and I cannot resist Indi anymore.
We lie in each others arms completely relaxed and watch the sunset over the horizon.
"It's so beautiful Romeo I wish we could stay here longer"
"I know it's out of this world" I pop a bottle of champagne and we savour what little time we have left on this beautiful island.
A week of passion and romance goes by so quick and before we know it we're back at home in Summer Bay. I go to the Irene's cafe to catch up with everyone and I wonder where Ruby is, I did text her to meet today.
"Irene have you seen Ruby she was meant to meet me here today?"
"No love, to be honest I haven't seen her since the wedding, it's almost like she's been hiding away"
I decide to go see her at home and on the way there I see her sitting on the beach by herself, her arms wrapped around her legs looking out to the sea in deep thought.
"Hey Rubz!"
"Oh hi Romeo I didn't realize you were home already"
"You knew I was back I texted you to meet today"
"Sorry Romeo I just don't feel well at the moment I'll see you sometime later ok"
And with that Ruby walks off and I don't know whats going on, I haven't done anything wrong and it doesn't make sense the way that she's been acting towards me.
I get home and Indi can see in my face that I'm not happy.
"Whats wrong you look a bit shocked?"
"I'm so confused it feels like Ruby is avoiding me and she's not herself I'm really worried about her"
"How about I go see her tonight and try talk to her, she might open up to me if it's more of a girl thing you know?"
"Thanks babe that would be great, she's just not being herself"
After dinner Indi goes to visit Ruby and I hope that she can find out whats been bothering her. I wake up on the couch and look at the time, jeez it's two in the morning...I check in our bedroom and I don't see Indi, I check outside for the car and it's not there. She must have stayed over night with Ruby guessing they must have had a few wines together.
I wake up in the morning check my phone and there's no calls or text's from Indi, there's a text from Ruby...'I have always loved you, I'm so sorry'. I call Ruby and there's no answer. I start panicking this doesn't make sense what is Ruby sorry about?
The hospital calls and Indi's been taken into intensive care. They won't tell me yet what has happened but it's not good. I start sweating and my heart is hurting, I feel like the world has collapsed beneath me.
The love of my life is not going to make it...I fall into a ball on the ground...the pain is unbearable...I can't breathe. I don't want to move or do anything because it will be real then.
What happened? Why is Ruby sorry?
My heart skips a beat, gliding up the aisle, barfoot in the hot sand, her blonde hair shimmering in the sunlight, my pulse quickens...I can't talk my eyes off of her. Her beauty is indescribable, I can't believe I am lucky enough to marry this woman that I am so madly inlove with.
Xavier my best man nudges me and winks..."You lucky, lucky man!"
"I will love you forever Indi, you take my breath away" I whisper in her ear as she stands next to me.
"I do" Indi says. "I do" I say with the biggest grin on my face.
Walking hand in hand down the aisle now a married couple we are surrounded by loved ones and their is so much excitement in the air it feels as though we've infected everyone with our happiness and love.
Ruby, my best friend stands out to me in the crowd, her eyes are bloody red and puffy. She doesn't smile at me as I walk past and I can see anger and regret written all over her face...I don't understand why.
There's no time to go see Ruby as we make our way to our getaway car, whatever it is I'm sure she's fine and I'll see her when I get back.
"Bye love's you have a great time on your honeymoon" Irene shouts over the crowd. We wave goodbye and the wind sweeps our hair back as we drive off.
"Are you ready Mrs Smith?" "I can't wait Mr smith" Indi winks at me as she's smiling. At this moment in time in our open convertible with the most stunning bride I am the happiest new groom in the world!
We step out into the warm tropical air, excited to have a few days of alone time together. We arrive in our suite and I cannot resist Indi anymore.
We lie in each others arms completely relaxed and watch the sunset over the horizon.
"It's so beautiful Romeo I wish we could stay here longer"
"I know it's out of this world" I pop a bottle of champagne and we savour what little time we have left on this beautiful island.
A week of passion and romance goes by so quick and before we know it we're back at home in Summer Bay. I go to the Irene's cafe to catch up with everyone and I wonder where Ruby is, I did text her to meet today.
"Irene have you seen Ruby she was meant to meet me here today?"
"No love, to be honest I haven't seen her since the wedding, it's almost like she's been hiding away"
I decide to go see her at home and on the way there I see her sitting on the beach by herself, her arms wrapped around her legs looking out to the sea in deep thought.
"Hey Rubz!"
"Oh hi Romeo I didn't realize you were home already"
"You knew I was back I texted you to meet today"
"Sorry Romeo I just don't feel well at the moment I'll see you sometime later ok"
And with that Ruby walks off and I don't know whats going on, I haven't done anything wrong and it doesn't make sense the way that she's been acting towards me.
I get home and Indi can see in my face that I'm not happy.
"Whats wrong you look a bit shocked?"
"I'm so confused it feels like Ruby is avoiding me and she's not herself I'm really worried about her"
"How about I go see her tonight and try talk to her, she might open up to me if it's more of a girl thing you know?"
"Thanks babe that would be great, she's just not being herself"
After dinner Indi goes to visit Ruby and I hope that she can find out whats been bothering her. I wake up on the couch and look at the time, jeez it's two in the morning...I check in our bedroom and I don't see Indi, I check outside for the car and it's not there. She must have stayed over night with Ruby guessing they must have had a few wines together.
I wake up in the morning check my phone and there's no calls or text's from Indi, there's a text from Ruby...'I have always loved you, I'm so sorry'. I call Ruby and there's no answer. I start panicking this doesn't make sense what is Ruby sorry about?
The hospital calls and Indi's been taken into intensive care. They won't tell me yet what has happened but it's not good. I start sweating and my heart is hurting, I feel like the world has collapsed beneath me.
The love of my life is not going to make it...I fall into a ball on the ground...the pain is unbearable...I can't breathe. I don't want to move or do anything because it will be real then.
What happened? Why is Ruby sorry?
Carolyns fan fiction draft
Based on the Australian television series Home and Away
Title: Deadly Love
Plot of the story:
The story is written through Romeo's point of view. Indigo Walker (Indi) and Romeo Smith who are deeply inlove with each other get married. They have a very romantic honeymoon and you can see that they are meant to be together. Ruby Buckton is Romeo's best friend and during the wedding Romeo notices that Ruby's been crying and is not being herself. He tries to visit Ruby when he gets back from his honeymoon but she doesn't hang around long enough for him to talk to her. Indi suggests going to talk to her after dinner one night but doesn't return. We find out that Ruby has been inlove with Romeo for a very long time and when Indi doesn't return from a visit back from Ruby's and ends up in hospital we begin to wonder what really happened that night.
Characters:
Indigo Walker
Romeo Smith
Ruby Buckton
Introduction:
The introduction is the wedding scene and goes in detail of the love that Romeo has for Indi. It's a romantic beginning and you goes into detail how Romeo see's Indi through his eyes. It mentions that Romeo see's Ruby very upset during their wedding but doesn't have time to talk to her then and decides to do so when he returns.
Middle:
Indi and Romeo have arrived to their honeymoon destination. They have a few nights together in an island paradise and I elaborate on how much they are enjoying themselves.
Ending:
The newly married couple arrive back home after their honeymoon. Romeo tries to meet up with Ruby but finds her on the beach, he tries to talk to her but she doesn't say much and walks off. He talks to Indi about it when he gets home and she suggests she goes to talk to Ruby. When Indi doesn't return that night Romeo isn't too worried but get's a shocking call from the hospital the next morning. Indi is in intensive care and won't make it. Romeo did receive a text from Ruby saying that she's always loved him and that she's so sorry, he can't get hold of her and starts to wonder if Ruby could have had something to do with Indi's death.
Title: Deadly Love
Plot of the story:
The story is written through Romeo's point of view. Indigo Walker (Indi) and Romeo Smith who are deeply inlove with each other get married. They have a very romantic honeymoon and you can see that they are meant to be together. Ruby Buckton is Romeo's best friend and during the wedding Romeo notices that Ruby's been crying and is not being herself. He tries to visit Ruby when he gets back from his honeymoon but she doesn't hang around long enough for him to talk to her. Indi suggests going to talk to her after dinner one night but doesn't return. We find out that Ruby has been inlove with Romeo for a very long time and when Indi doesn't return from a visit back from Ruby's and ends up in hospital we begin to wonder what really happened that night.
Characters:
Indigo Walker
Romeo Smith
Ruby Buckton
Introduction:
The introduction is the wedding scene and goes in detail of the love that Romeo has for Indi. It's a romantic beginning and you goes into detail how Romeo see's Indi through his eyes. It mentions that Romeo see's Ruby very upset during their wedding but doesn't have time to talk to her then and decides to do so when he returns.
Middle:
Indi and Romeo have arrived to their honeymoon destination. They have a few nights together in an island paradise and I elaborate on how much they are enjoying themselves.
Ending:
The newly married couple arrive back home after their honeymoon. Romeo tries to meet up with Ruby but finds her on the beach, he tries to talk to her but she doesn't say much and walks off. He talks to Indi about it when he gets home and she suggests she goes to talk to Ruby. When Indi doesn't return that night Romeo isn't too worried but get's a shocking call from the hospital the next morning. Indi is in intensive care and won't make it. Romeo did receive a text from Ruby saying that she's always loved him and that she's so sorry, he can't get hold of her and starts to wonder if Ruby could have had something to do with Indi's death.
Sarah's fan fiction draft
In the beginning...
Outline - Hermione has at last returned to finish her 7th and final year at Hogwarts after the War between Voldermort, with her two friends Ron and Harry. Hermione is announced head girl and draco is her partner for the year as head boy. As they work together they acknowledge each others differences and at last admit their unspoken love for each other.
Characters - Hermione, Draco, Ron and Harry
Hermione - shocked and angered by draco being headboy, as the story deepens, she realizes that draco is the one she truely loves and struggles to come to terms with her feelings for him after their hateful relationship they both shared with each other while attending Hogwarts.
Draco - Draco has always had hidden, secret feelings for Hermione throughout their time at Hogwarts. He concealed his feelings as his father and family would have looked down upon their relationship and his feelings for her as she is a muggle born, "mudblood"
Ron - At first Ron is not worried about the amount of time Hermione has to spend with Draco to assist in the Head of the School duties, but as the story deepens he realizes and suspects that Hermione as fallen for someone else.
Harry - Hermione confides in harry her new found feelings for Draco and asks for advice and to not tell Ron. Faced with the dilemma of keeping this importantly huge secret from his bestfriend Ron, and also finding out the shocking news the Hermione has feelings for his former school vival, Harry finds it hard to know which way to turn.
Writing point of view : Hermione Granger
INTRO - Starts off with point of view of Hermione Granger. Initially shocked and disgusted with the news that Draco Malfoy has been awarded Head Boy and will be spending most of his spear time with her due to Head's of the school duties.
MIDDLE -
END -
I bolted off the Hogwarts Express as soon as it came into a halt outside the school that I would now be leader of with my fellow arch rival Draco Malfoy. I could hear Ron and Harry yell after me as i stormed my way through the crowd towards the warmth of my welcoming dormitory.
Outline - Hermione has at last returned to finish her 7th and final year at Hogwarts after the War between Voldermort, with her two friends Ron and Harry. Hermione is announced head girl and draco is her partner for the year as head boy. As they work together they acknowledge each others differences and at last admit their unspoken love for each other.
Characters - Hermione, Draco, Ron and Harry
Hermione - shocked and angered by draco being headboy, as the story deepens, she realizes that draco is the one she truely loves and struggles to come to terms with her feelings for him after their hateful relationship they both shared with each other while attending Hogwarts.
Draco - Draco has always had hidden, secret feelings for Hermione throughout their time at Hogwarts. He concealed his feelings as his father and family would have looked down upon their relationship and his feelings for her as she is a muggle born, "mudblood"
Ron - At first Ron is not worried about the amount of time Hermione has to spend with Draco to assist in the Head of the School duties, but as the story deepens he realizes and suspects that Hermione as fallen for someone else.
Harry - Hermione confides in harry her new found feelings for Draco and asks for advice and to not tell Ron. Faced with the dilemma of keeping this importantly huge secret from his bestfriend Ron, and also finding out the shocking news the Hermione has feelings for his former school vival, Harry finds it hard to know which way to turn.
Writing point of view : Hermione Granger
INTRO - Starts off with point of view of Hermione Granger. Initially shocked and disgusted with the news that Draco Malfoy has been awarded Head Boy and will be spending most of his spear time with her due to Head's of the school duties.
MIDDLE -
END -
I bolted off the Hogwarts Express as soon as it came into a halt outside the school that I would now be leader of with my fellow arch rival Draco Malfoy. I could hear Ron and Harry yell after me as i stormed my way through the crowd towards the warmth of my welcoming dormitory.
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